Martin Fowler wants nobody to let an LLM write the first draft
Fowler admits he may be unable to spot 'LLM Voice' reliably, yet his site now requires disclosure of any AI help with writing.
Fowler calls LLM prose an uncanny valley and says writing is how he thinks, so delegating the draft delegates the thinking. His own concessions are specific: Jim Highsmith uses an LLM because of Parkinson's, and he accepts that.
Readers disagreed over whether the problem is the voice or just bad writing.
Delegating the draft delegates the thinking
Martin Fowler's note says "LLM Voice" triggers a human reaction he calls an uncanny valley of prose. He doubts his ability to detect it, since some phrasings he dislikes are also used by people and the gap may be generational. His rule: don't have an LLM write a draft, because even heavy editing struggles to remove the voice, and accepting rephrasing suggestions is risky. An outline may be fine. Contributors to his site must declare AI help, and he accepts the voice from Jim Highsmith, who has Parkinson's. Low-stakes forms nobody reads may be fine to delegate.
The thread: cooking, critics, and a prose-over-substance complaint
"I enjoy cooking from scratch, and I really don't like frozen foods, microwave/TV dinners, or even DoorDashing but we're past complaining/arguing/shaming folks who don't cook every meal from scratch" — yawnxyz, who designs and prototypes AI interfaces
A reader who calls themselves aggressively pro-AI agreed with Fowler's symptom anyway: everything sounds identical and rambles, and they stop reading partway (a self-described pro-AI reader).
The practical tip came from tptacek:
"LLMs are exceptionally useful writing critics if you know how to hold them correctly, but you can't use a single word they suggest to you" — tptacek
That splits the issue: Fowler's objection is to LLM output in the draft, while tptacek's workflow keeps the model in the critic's seat and the words human.
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